Thali`a Junior Scholar
Posts : 14 Join date : 2013-08-02
| Subject: Thali`a's Collection of Words Mon Aug 05, 2013 6:55 pm | |
| Greetings. Just a few words to introduce a sample of my work. Hopefully you will see the difference in the styles. I love poetry and songs and try to make everything a little different. I hope you enjoy reading as much as I did writing them. Thali`a Resolutions
I joined the British Army in 1929 For the army life to me just then, was looking simply fine So I dashed into the office and I signed the dotted line That was my good resolution for 1929
I was drafted out to India in 1931 The girl I left behind me said “Thank God now he’s gone” To celebrate the occasion, she went out with another one That was her bad resolution for 1931
I landed out in India in 1932 And an old soldier said to me “”How long have you got to do?” When I told him 4 years he said “Here’s a bullet for you” That was his good resolution for 1932
I went on an instruction course in 1933 I was working night and day, expecting to get a D By the time the course had ended I was nearly on C.B That was the Officer’s resolution for 1933
I left India for Palestine in 1934 And I don’t think there is one of us wants to see that place anymore We we’re happy when the L.Fs took over Frozapore That was their good resolution for 1934
I landed up in Haifa in 1935 And I think we were all lucky, to leave that place alive First we were doing one guard, but finished up doing five That was Mussolini’s resolution for 1935
We left Haifa for Shanghai in 1936 I took the place of a Corporal, who was in a terrible fix But as I passed the QM stores, he shouted “Here’s your chopsticks” That was the Quartermaster’s resolution for 1936
I landed up in Tunt-sin in 1937 As I played ping pong with Anna-May Wong, I thought I was in heaven But when Anna-May Wong was bet by King Kong in the last eleven Twas the referee’s resolution for 1937
I was sent back to the depot in 1938 With a big RP upon my arm, I stood at the castle gate And God help any rookie, who came in a minute late That was a rotten resolution for 1938
I went back into civvy life in 1939 I’d been on the dole that long, I thought the thing was mine And when I went one morning he said “Nothing for you next time” I finished with resolutions in 1939
Regret
I’m sorry that I doubted you I know that I was wrong And when I got to know the truth I burst forth into song It seems to me like yesterday When first I saw your smile Those twinkling eyes, and flashing teeth Seemed to follow me mile by mile Where’re I go, What`er I do Your face I can’t dismiss And very oft when small I’m sure You felt your mother’s kiss So I hope you will forgive me And try and understand I’m sorry now, I didn’t know So please “Don’t play the band” Just smile my staunch American As you did on that first night Then I can smile instead of smile And then switch out the light Goodnight
On the day you marry me
Astounded by your beauty The day that we first met Your shining eyes Your angel smile With my heart I made a bet
My precious love Our precious moments To my heart you have the key Want to hold your hand Want you in my arms On the day you marry me
I prayed one day you’d be my wife For all the world to see So overcome That day, you said That you would marry me
My precious love Our precious moments To my heart you have the key Want to hold your hand Want you in my arms On the day you marry me
I stand here now beside you I say this to you now To love, protect Forever more My love, this is my vow
My precious love Our precious moments To my heart you have the key Want to hold your hand Want you in my arms On the day you marry me
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Rennek Cor Scholarly Administrator
Posts : 191 Join date : 2013-01-15
| Subject: Re: Thali`a's Collection of Words Mon Aug 05, 2013 9:16 pm | |
| These are lovely poems Thali'a thank you for your contribution. The only unfortunate thing is that the Library is IC, so Resolutions will only work if the frame of reference for the places was changed to be Combine Canon related. Hope this isn't too much of an issue. | |
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Thali`a Junior Scholar
Posts : 14 Join date : 2013-08-02
| Subject: reply Mon Aug 05, 2013 9:22 pm | |
| Not an issue Rennek. I have some other work I can submit. Will get onto it. | |
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Thali`a Junior Scholar
Posts : 14 Join date : 2013-08-02
| Subject: new submissions Mon Aug 05, 2013 9:34 pm | |
| ((I'll try and work on resolutions but maybe be too tricky so here are some more that I can sumbit instead Rennek. A little more generic)) My Song for You
My song for you is tender It's motions soft and sweet It's rhythm very steady A definite rhythmic beat The tenderness your heartstrings The sweetness your blue eyes The rest stands for your character As clear as sunny skies The way you tease, the way you laugh The way you speak and smile I always will remember As I traverse each long mile And singing as I march along I won't ever feel blue For safe inside my heart I'll keep My Song For You
The Galaxy
It holds my heroes It holds my enemies But sure forth I shall soon be here again Beware for those that have sought me out I shall be the darkness you never thought possible For my old friends I am there though you may never see me For my loves, you know me and where I am There are stars out there where I look and I know the ones I see They don’t all get along but share the same path Me That I am grateful for, my wonderful galaxy
To My Love
My life My love My Angel of darkness With you by my side Then nothing can part us
I love you, I want you It is plain to see My sweetheart My darling You’re my world to me
I want you I need you By day And by night When you are beside me I know it’s alright
Cherished one My golden heart Never to descend My one and all My golden light My love will never end
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Rennek Cor Scholarly Administrator
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| Subject: Re: Thali`a's Collection of Words Mon Aug 05, 2013 10:28 pm | |
| That's great thank you, do you have a title for the work? | |
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Thali`a Junior Scholar
Posts : 14 Join date : 2013-08-02
| Subject: Collection title Mon Aug 05, 2013 10:51 pm | |
| Hi Again Rennek
How about "Life through my eyes". It reflects a lot of my own feelings
Thali`a | |
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Rennek Cor Scholarly Administrator
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| Subject: Re: Thali`a's Collection of Words Wed Aug 28, 2013 8:06 pm | |
| Approved and submitted to the library | |
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